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for London Calling

by xevilyx Kyx

person bansheeh
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please dont listen to idiot reviews, we all know spike drinks hard liquer *sheesh*
good chapter by the way keep em cumming *pun intended*
person flameywicca
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Interruption suck my Puerto Rican, American-ised ASS!!! Spikey just HAS to tell her. And she can't be all in denial like she is on the show, either! More soon, please? ~flamey
person October
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH, Spike! Tell her you love her already!!!!! *grin*

Great story, can't wait to find out what happens next...cause something ALWAYS happeOct
person charlotte
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, I really like this fic! can't wait for more!!
person i_digress
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay,
I should be reviewing this story on the basis of the quality of the writing. So I'll do that first and then have my rant.

I am really enjoying this story - I enjoy the 'will they, won't they' element and that they do but...it still doesn't work out! I love the fact that the Spike/Buffy by-play isn't the end of the story, that each time I think they've got it sorted something else intrudes and their doubts get thrown to the foreground. The mulitplicity of this tale is wonderful and I always look forward to the frequent updates.

So..here's the rant. I've read the recent authors notes and can't help thinking WTF! I am British, I am a whisky drinker and I come from a family of whisky drinkers. My grandfather prefered blended Scotch, my father prefers American sour mash, my mother likes Irish whiskey and I like Scotch malt. There is no fixed choice. It's a matter of personal taste. And judging a story on its whisky contents is utter bollocks.

I thi this story, I am unconcerned by Spike's choice of booze and anyone who is is really missing the point. Rant over.
person Bonnie
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I want to tell you how wonderful the story is, and how much I'm enjoying it, and how well you've taken elements of the show and incorporated them into your story. I want to say I think you've captured their personalities perfectly and meldour our vision with the original nearly flawlessly....but...I have ONE beef, and it's making me mad. Very mad.

YOU AREN'T WRITING FAST ENOUGH!!!! ''

Everything I said above though is still true. Keep doing what you're doing, only do asteaster.


:)
person Rhonda
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This has been such a fun story to read. I love your characters. The story is great. It's such a sweet story. The lack of communication between those two, at times, is just too funny. Oh, and the fight scenes with Buffy were great! Yes, strangling Dru with a tassled bra was hilarious. I can't wait to read more of the story!
person karen
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A cookie? Can I have a Spike shaped Cookie with it being anatomically correct? Teehee. I love this story. Come on you know you want to give us more. And all those nit picky people about younger people drinking whiskey are just nit picking. I'm 25 and know quite a few younger people drinking it. Personally I don't care for it, but that doesn't mean others don't.
person bec
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay I'm enjoying this fic. But I want to you to realise 1 thing. If people are busy worrying about little things like the drinking of whisky and nothing like bad writing, plot holes, bad character development etc, then you're on to a really good thing. Because if silly things bother them, then everything else is completely dandy:-)
person kimber
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, double chocolate chip please......LOL


I LOVE this story.....and I learned a long time ago....IT'S FANFICTION PEOPLE.......and he write has control....and can do as they wish....which is a good thing or we'd have alot of white bread same oleriesries......not everything should run strictly cannon......where is the fun in that........I read for the entertainment......and so far this story has entertained the hell out of me and I look frequently for updates.....


Kimber