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for London Calling

by xevilyx Kyx

person lolita
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
7. chapter 6... Well what can I say - I just lurve the way that you write it's incredible, I am completely engrossed by this, thanks for a fantastic read.
person lolita
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
8. chapter 7... Poor Spike he is always jealous. and I agree with you totally - James Marsters is hot. :)
person lolita
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
9. chapter 8... Hehehe, Anya is so funny, you've captured her character perfectly as well, the love scene was HOT as in I need the fire brigade to put out the flames ... mmm firemen... anyhoo, loving it.
person lolita
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
10 chapter 9... Poor Spike he was being a complete gentleman and yet it still backfired on him, poor guy. Poor Buffy too because she's hurting although she shouldn't be. Loving it though... ;)
person lolita
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
11 chapter 10... Phew that was the hottest yet, and it was also done - in my opinion - in a very artsy way. Liking the cleverness.:)
And him missing her last sentence, it's like in every chick flick ever made when your yelling - noooo at the screen- I just yelled nnooooo too :)
person lolita
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
12 chapter 11... well isn't Buffy the little sex kitten, nice to see. You go girl. :) I liked the humor you had in there too.
person lolita
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
13 chapter 12... No a little angst is good for the soul, especially when it's well written as that was... :)
person lolita
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
14 chapter 13... wow that was hillarious, I so saw those fights, and when Buffy kicked Dru in the ass. mwahahahha. Oh how I laughed. The declaration of love was so sweet too and Harmony's a dumb ass. :)
person Lolita
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
15 chapter 14... You're right things did just get more complicated. Can't wait to find out what happens.
person lolita
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
16 chapter 15... This was sweet and yet so bad at the same time - not bad as in you. Bad as in Spike and Xander are Bad naughty boys. Spike's especially bad for hitting his friend on his wedding day! :)