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by Werewolf

person QueenBoadicea
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5 Okay, this all wrapped up rather quickly. I have to admit the sex was hot but the emotional aspect of the story felt rather forced and rushed. Having Anya depart after only some minor anguish on her part was simply too convenient. As smut, this story works. As drama, it falls rather flat.
person QueenBoadicea
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4 Giles as a jester? Golly, that is one sick joke. :P
person QueenBoadicea
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3 Great. Hyena Boy and Cave Girl are repossessed and Giles has been taken by the repo man. Ha! I'm sorry, I couldn't resist that. :D
person QueenBoadicea
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2 Okay, I despise dei ex machina so you'd better have a good explanation for Faith's extremely punctual appearance.
person QueenBoadicea
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1 Oh, Hyena Boy and Cave Girl smut! I haven't read one of these before now and I like it. I'm surprised Anya would just run out of the room, though. I thought she'd get really pissed and start screaming. I wonder what she'll do when she finds out Ethan Rayne is responsible for this. I hope she turns him into something nasty--like a rabbit.