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for Sweet Surrender

by Sophie

person Andie
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
May I just say that I LOVE this story... it's so compelling I can hardly wait for the next part :)
person vicann
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! The tension builds. I'm hanging on by the edge of my seat. Can't wait for the next update.
person Mandy
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! Please update again soon!! I hope Riley doesn't show up again until Spike gets home!!!!
person laura
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oohhh keep writing...at first I had trouble with the step family thing, but i'm hooked!
person vicann
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the little twist with Darla and David, very nice. Can't wait to see what you have in store for Riley. I'm looking forward to the next update.
person irissss
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, don't leave it there, what is Riley going to do? please update soon
person IceBlueRose
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Agh, what place to leave off!!! But I was glad to see that the story had been updated, so you're forgiven (and I'm sure you're just dying for my forgiveness, right? Note sarcasm.) Anyway, great chapter, I'm glad that you gave Darla a guy...David, lol. Sorry, I'm liking the irony of it. And I'm off track again, so I'll just say that I can't wait to find out what's up with Riley so I hope you update again soon!
person nat
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Riley is really creepy. I hope Buffy learns the truth about him before he does any major damage. Maybe Spike could give Riley a good butt-kicking. I have been following this story with a great deal of interest. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person avril
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, suspense! I like it a lot. nice touch with X-man auntie... great that they finally *did* it...
oh, riley is a psycho! great! (I mean - I like him being evil for a change)
keep up with your good work and take care
avril :)
person Nicky
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You evil little....

How could you leave it there?

That is not nice!


Thanks for updating, you made me smile!
ky Nky