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for Crush

by Margie

person myladymystere
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love that you have Xander lusting after Spike before the chip. The 'Big Bad' was really sexy too !!
person Flit
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweetie, your chapter two is DEFINITELY not what it's supposed to be. Perhaps you should keep Harry in his own section?
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that's weird... really enjoyed the 2 chapters of crush... but what's with the 2 other chapters, one Harry Potter & one Chobits, and neither of them are by you?! I mean WTF?! Is this part of AFF's code problems? I've been noticing a lot of missing chapters, and stuff in the wrong order lately, not to mention the corruption in the text of every single chapter and story, (including my own) since the most recent database crash *sighs* hope they get things sorted soon, in the meantime I'll keep pointing out the big booboo's to fellow authors when I notice them, (still got to edit out the text corruptions to one of my own stories, I so wish you could just re-upload the whole thing instead of using that text box thingie)
person Purple Mist
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very yummy! HOpe you write another chapter or a sequal.
person Shaolin
schedule January 9, 0000 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah...I always knew Draco would go for
the kinky lifestyle...that's how i write him too..
sexy and slinky...but no more Y-fronts OK? They
scare me! LOL
person erobey
schedule January 9, 0000 at 12:00 AM
ok sivan,
i love the cliff hangers!
please do update this one or tell me there is a sequel!
cheers,
erobey