rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed this story. Them switching bodies was a great idea. Lots of action, laughs and steamy goodness. great job !!

Hi. Great story! But do you realize that your first chapter is at the end of the story?

Why is Ch 1 Ch 9?

I enjoyed this, and will definitely read the other stories in the series, but did you know that the story actually starts at Chapter 2, and Chapter 9 is actually Chapter 1? (So 1 = 2, 2 = 3, 3 = 4, 4 = 5, 5 = 6, 6 = 7, 7 = 8, 8 = 9, 9 = 1.)

actually make that chapter 1 = 2, 2 = 3, 3 = 4, 4 = 5, 5 = 6, 6 = 8, 7 = 9, 8 = 10, 9 = 1

I still really enjoyed reading this anyway... :P

BUGGER!! it posted twice!! feel free to delete the copy... BTW, confused Brit here, can someone tell me why some writers say 'Bullocks' instead of 'Bollocks', though it can have the same meaning as 'Bullshit', as in "What a load of Bollocks/Balls!!", it is a common expletive, such as 'Bloody Hell', and 'Shite', and someone is a 'Tosser' not a 'Wanker', and lets not forget, 'Git', 'Prat' and my personal fav 'Toerag', and you stick 2 fingers up at someone and tell them to 'Piss Off'... Ah the joys of Brit profanity, and lets not get into Cockney Rhyming Slang... personally I think either they misheard, or it's the evils of American Spellcheckers *snickers* :P

Aww, that was beautiful. I loved it so much. So sweet, I'm off to read the sequel, Yay.

Ch. 10 Oh, Giles is so cute when he splutters. I loved this story especially all the raunchy NC-17 rated sex. You write erotica so well, it practically leaps off the page...and stains my glasses. :D I'm going to have to take a cold shower now. Or...I could read the sequel!

Ch. 4 I don't know why Xander is so upset. Chris thought "Spike" was the boyfriend and frankly I can understand why. Dyed hair, painted fingernails, leather coats in 80-degree heat...yep, makes sense to me.

Ch. 5 Oh, that was very cute. :) I remember season two with the red Speedo. (sighs)