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by katharina99

person Margie
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh Giles. Can't wait to find out what the conversation will be with him! I'm loving Spike's random Xander endearments. "The boy really was adorable, if you went for that sort of thing." *Sigh* So sweet, in a Spike sort of way. And I'm also loving all of Xander's conflicting emotions. Does he lust for Spike? Is it wrong? Is it normal? How can he come to terms with being 'property'? Poor Xan. Love the angst. Great job!
person RedPat
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know, much as I'm loving the Spike/Xander interaction (and boy, howdy! am I loving it!!!) when is the Scooby gang going to figure out that Xander's nowhere to be seen? AND they have their mystical whatever to stop the latest apocolypse? And someone remembers the details of the bargain to GET them the mystical whatever?

Or is this going to be another example of "we only notice Xander when we need something fixed". I'm kind of hoping the Scoobys show up to "rescue" Xander from Spike, only to have Xander tell them where to go, and how to get there.

Great story the the way.
person LollyPop
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story gets better and better with each chapter. Thank you for the quick updates. I look forward to many more. Lolly
person Aonikoi Liikin
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This one was just...swell...mmm...swell..I mean...It was great! Really! Can't wait for more..wait...yes I can, cuz I am a very patient person and if you don't post it soon, my brain will melt from the suspence!!!
Hehe. Thanks for writing!
~Aoni
person bec
schedule September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey. Enjoyed this so much I checked out your website and got caught up with the other chapters. Nice. So there's going to be more right? becasue you can't leave it with that chapter 8 ending...much much more please.
person Aonikoi Liikin
schedule September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love this! Why haven't you put more up yet? Naw, I'm just kidding, but make sure you update as soon as possible! I have a very small patience level!
Ta for the time,
Tootles.
~Aoni
person LollyPop
schedule September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Poor Kitten. I feel so bad for him. hehehe. This is a really good story, can't wait to read morow aow are the other Scoobies reacting to this situation? Will Kitten find happiness with his master? I am waiting ever so impatiently for more. Please continue. Lolly