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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update this thing?!!!!!! I'm going crazy from it not being updated!!!!!! It is to good to let sit on the shelf for to long!
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!
Please bear with me as this is my first review that I have ever given. I really enjoyed your story "Bargain" because I felt that you really captured Spike and Xander perfectly. The dialogue was awesome, as I read the story I could actually picture them saying all of that. If it wasn't erotica it could be an episode IMHO. I think that everything about Bargain was well done, there was erotic stuff, sweet stuff, funny stuff. Good job! I was also wondering if there would be anymore installments for this? Please, please, please, say yes! I hope that this review was helpful.
Please bear with me as this is my first review that I have ever given. I really enjoyed your story "Bargain" because I felt that you really captured Spike and Xander perfectly. The dialogue was awesome, as I read the story I could actually picture them saying all of that. If it wasn't erotica it could be an episode IMHO. I think that everything about Bargain was well done, there was erotic stuff, sweet stuff, funny stuff. Good job! I was also wondering if there would be anymore installments for this? Please, please, please, say yes! I hope that this review was helpful.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is just.....fuck! Yes, Fuck! There should be more, much more, and QUICKLY!
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, i'm really loving this fic but is it ever gonna turn out alright for Xander? He's given himself to Spike for the greater good and he's being treated so badly. I love Xander (oh...and Spike...yummmmm), please make them happy soon :-) p.s it was far to long between chpts...please write again soon.
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank all the gods above, a new chapter! I was going crazy. I just love this story. Xander should indeed pay for the way he treated Spike and this is the perfect revenge. But please, make Xander just a little happy for all of us. Or a lot, I'm not picky...
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great!!!!!!!!! I started reading it on another website, but it messed up and I came here. This is a perfect fan fiction. I've read a lot of fan fiction! And this is one of the best I've seen. I hope to see many more wonderful chapters in the upcomeing weeks.
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kate, dear, I?m starving!!! PLEASE feed another wonderful chapter. ... and don?t hold back! Xander has been very naughty and needs more punishment than that. Don?t keep me waiting too long... (evil Angelus smirk)
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good. You write more, you write more now!
BelleDraco)O+
BelleDraco)O+
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
psst, quick. write more. *shifty eyed look*
I love your story. I want to have your stories baby, even. But, does anything ever get better for poor Xander?! Everytime I see another updated chapter I celebrate and parade happily... and after I'm done I feel like ripping out all of Spike's hair and hot gluing it to his nether regions. *weeps bitterly in the corner* Poor slave!Xander... *wears all black and mourns loudly and rather annoyingly*
I love your story. I want to have your stories baby, even. But, does anything ever get better for poor Xander?! Everytime I see another updated chapter I celebrate and parade happily... and after I'm done I feel like ripping out all of Spike's hair and hot gluing it to his nether regions. *weeps bitterly in the corner* Poor slave!Xander... *wears all black and mourns loudly and rather annoyingly*
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more please. be happy,, I can't give you any constructive criticism because I can't say exactly why I love you story so much but I do so gushy stuff and more please